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PostSubject: The Comic Siren pt 6 finale   The Comic Siren pt 6 finale Icon_minitimeFri Nov 04, 2011 4:22 pm

Back in the Isolation ward
with the help of Serena and her trance music. unbeknowest to Helena and Bob who was going over John latest test results......the Guard who eyelids were getting heavy to keep his eyes open and focus his relief personal has not showned up to relieve him from duty......then he heard Serena plea to set John free...Go to him the Siren plead let him loose and then give yourself to him....the guard was soon under the spell of the Siren and robotically pushed the open button on the panel and walked into the room..

John inside eagerly awaited to be free.... John hissed to the guard
John : hurry unstrap me..Serena is in danger... Hurry
the guard robotically began unloosening John straps. on his left arm

...Helena happen to look up and called the guards name ,Helena: puzzled that's strange
Bob: what???
Helena : the guard is gone..he was just there.

Bob: quickly deduce as if a light bulb came on: The commander...they ran over just in time to see ..the guard working on the straps on John's legs.... Helena looked in horror it wasn't John anymore...what was left was a creature..John looks up and Helena caught his stare

Bob yells : No!!!!! Stop!!!! Helena push the RED ALERT alarm...(john with his free hand gave him enough positioned to pull his other arm free ...and he grabbed the guard arm...and John was beginning to feed ..slowly he started to taking the guards very essense away.. but Bob runs in and tackles the guard out of John grasp just intime before John establish a connection......a angry John bust out of the last strap and quickly got off the table and jumped on Bob back grabbing him by the back of his clothes and tossed him like a ragdoll ssending him across the room and Bob hit the wall hard and landed with a thud..

Helena crys: NOOOO John stop it.... you don't know what you are doing...... Please
John who was targeting Bob turns short of the doctor and turned eyes furiously and stared at at Helena..... John growls and snarled at Helena as if he didn't reconize he or what she was saying.......
.Helena pleads: Please John...your not like her....your John Koenig commander of moonbase Alpha..your human remember John!!!....remember me please John.....come back... fight John fight her.....

John turnsaround with a menacing grin walks slowly towards Helena. as Helena put her stretch out her arms infront of her as if to keep John at bay as she backed up
John: snared under his fangs glimmering under his lips and replied: Don't be a fraid...I won't hurt you......much
Helena pertified replied in a shaky voice: John I know your in there.......Don't do this Please!!!! stop please remember fight John..fight......she cried as she had nowhere to goas she was backed in a corner and she nervously pulled out her laser

Helena: please don't let me do this John

John closing in and replied: I need to save her and you are in my way as a cocked his head to oneside
Bob awakens and looks up to see John going towards Helena: and he grabs his Laser

Helena sees: no Bob nooooo

John turns just in time Bob shoots his laser and it hit John head on John is puzzled that he was still standing the stun setting doesn't work on him anymore and he turns to go after Bob once
again.....
Helena runs in the medical center and grabs a syringe ofa very strong sedative and runs back just when John kick the laser out of Bob hand so quickly.... Bob didn't see John move and John took Bob by the neck and lifted him up till his feet wasn't touching the floor...
Helena runs in and Stabs John in the back...John let go Bob and gave out a howl in pain
and turn towards Helena with teeth bare....John turns to grab Helena..and he missed
Helena again plead : please John.....don't let her win...please fight John.....please

HELENA SET THE GUN TO KILL

John almost grabs Helena again... Helena got out of the way the sedative was finally taking hold..the Siren is begging John to finish off Helena......He looks at Helena who is aiming the laser at him...eyes began to blurr.

Helena again pleads: fight John ....fight

pain shot through John as if he was hit in the stomach and he falls to his knees .....Gooooooooooooo John gasp It was the real John pleading now... he looked up at Helena and his eyes were back to blue then white then blue.....gooooooooo John said again lock me in..... Now!!! I won't be able to hold it much longer..... ..Bob gets his barings and helped Helena drag the guard out and they shut the door again...John writhering in pain as he crys out......then John crawls weakly in the far corner in a fetal position

meanwhile

at command center

Victor and the crew watch as the eagle loaded with the cargo lifted off the launch pad
Alan: we be in orbit in 15 minutes

Victor replied: becareful Alan..she is desperate she'll will do and try anything
Alan; will do professor
in the cargo hold the Siren is being guarded by 2 guards : longston and jeffries
the Siren in one last attempt ..used all her power to will the guards to do her bidding

they seemed to freeze where they stand..Jeffies went to the cockpit where Alan was just hitting orbit
Jeffries: We must turn back
Alan: not looking up thought that was a strange request replied: what are you talking about Jeferies we can't go back
Jeffies again : We got to go back and he grabs the controls...Alan begin to struggle with Jeffries...Alan tries to pry Jeffries hands from the control it was like a vice..the eagle was going out of control
In command center Paul yells
Professor somethings wrong the eagle is out of control
Sarah began to page Alan: eagle 2 this is moon base Alpha do you read???? eagle 2 to moonbase Alpha do you read me???? No response she looks toward the professor

Victor in frustration: what' going on up there???
In the eagle
Alan finally got out of his seatbelt and again try to grab control of the eagle..Jeffries finally let go and he grabbed Alan around the neck trying to pull him out of the chair..Alan gave Jeffries a hard hit with his elbow in his gut and Jeffries let go..Alan out of breath tries to wake Jeffries out of it...Jeffries didn't hear him hit Alan.... ..Alan in turn hit Jeffries hard across the jaw..sending jeffries reeling against the wall dazing him ...for good measure Alan hit him again...this time another right hook and down Jeffries went....Alan got his barings, before he knew it they the eagel was about to crash on the surface of the moon....... Alan jumped in the chair and pulled up on the controls ....

Alan repied to the eagle: come on baby...come onnnnnnnnnnnnnn ........ and the eagle finally responded and Alan got the eagle to turn up just in time....deverting disaster...Alan calls to Alpha
Alpha this is eagle 2 do you copy???
Victor : thank god...what happen Alan???
Alan: I tell ya later....got to do something first
Victor : Alan????Alan???
Alan put the eagle on manual control
and went in the cargo hold where..longston finally got his barings being knocked about the cabin and he was about to shoot the lock off the container

Alan just in time jumps on Longston .. longston yells: let me go let me go she needs me...
as Longston hits Alan knocking him backwards..and Longston shoots ...hitting the seal but it didn't open ..Alan exchange fire hits longston and he falls
The heavy lid begins to vibrate ..trying to shake the broken seal loose..Alan tried from his ordeal runs over to the freezant gun
The Siren: spoke to him: Let me out>........Let me out ...I need you now..come to me Alan...come

As Alan comes closer...does the Siren have him????as the lid is about to openas the last of the seal is shaken away ...the Siren says: I am freeeeeeee
Alan swings the gun up and replied: not so fast Toots and began spraying the lid ...the Siren scream nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
the lid falls shut giving Alan enough time to reseal the container

in the cell..John body lurch forward as to reach out to someone...face distorted his eyes were white..fangs showing....and as if he realize he lost his Serena he falls back as if he was hit with a powerful blow and and then he looked like he was going through convulsions

Helena in distrss watching John pain as bob looks on...

in the Eagle the seal is secure..The Siren gave one last ditch effort..but she sounded scared and desperate
The Siren: I can give you anything..Please don't do this..we can be wonderful together you and I
Alan replied: Sorry ..your not my type
The angry Siren replies; He's gonna die with out me..he has no will without me he will die..your commander will die.....
the Siren begins to laugh deviously..He's gonna die.........the laughter got louder and louder
Alan runs to the cockpit: Alan eagle 2 to alpha...eagle 2 to alpha do you copy???
Victor : yes Alan we hear you..what's going on??
Alan replied gladly: Time to take out the garbage
Victor: when your ready..Alan pushes a button the cargo hatch open and out jettison the container
Alan: the container is gone

In Medical
John SOAKED IN SWEAT. sat straight up reaching for the container he sees in his head floating away ...as he yells in horroe NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!he then collapse back on the floor

in Main Mission

Victor: very good Alan head back to the base
Alan; remember the haunted words the Siren said and ask how was the commander????
Victor: fighting
Alan: and he'll keep fighting....
Victor to Paul : I be in Medical
Paul then ask: Professor is the commander gonna make it???
Victor smiles pats Paul on the shoulder: lets hope so,.

In Medical
Victor arrive just intime to see John's life signs on the monitor take a turn for the worst
Helena looking in desperate need to be with him: yells John don't give in..please John fight
inside John is trembling on the floor violently as he thrashed around
Bob: his heart rate is weak , pulse almost none existant..we are loosing him..Alan rushes in and sees what's going on..and replied that what she meant..Victor who??
Alan : the Siren she said she took the commnaders well away..and with out her the commander will give up his will to live....she was telling the truth

Victor looked at John and replied : looks that way
Helena couldn't take it any more she had to be with him..even if to die in her arms , she will not let John die alone.she pushed the button

Victor screams: Nooooooooo Helena

Helena runs inside where a lifeless John layed....Helena takes John in her arms and rocked him she began to crys ..Noooooo John please don't leave me..don't goooo

Victor and Alan and Bob helplessly looked on..sadly they thought John was lost to them...until John breathe in a deep gasp of air.... and his eyes fluntered opened..they were the best looking blue eyes anyone wanted to see

John weakly responded : Helena????

Helena looked down with her stained teared face..and smiled
Bob scans the commander and replied : the mutant cells are gone..no trace.. heart rate vitals are back to normal

Victor bent down and takes John hand and shakes it and replied: Well done John thought we lost you
John: you almost did, but I have a doctor with one great bedside manner
Alan: welcome back commander
Helena smiled at Victor
John gives a big smile and kisses helena hand

24 hours past..John was well enough to go to main mission where the long range scan shows the container of the Siren tumbling far far away into space

John was just staring at the screen..as Victor approached looking at John concernly
John senses his friend mood and replied: I okay
Victor unsure: really??
John: yes I am sure
Victor looks at the screen that John never took his eyes off..and pats John on the back and replied:It will take time: she will fade the feeling will pass

John: it will get easier from here is that what your trying to say?
Victor smiled: If you want to talk

John turn to look at his concern friend
John: I know...thanks for everything

John looks back at the screen when Helena came in and Victor was walking pass her he stopped and tells her: give him time, he's been through a ordeal that's not hard to forget
Victor leaves
unsure on what to say.. as she thought to her self as she watched John ....how a alien had so much power and will over John ...even now ,after everything he's been through she can sense John sadness for the creature who harmed so many and scarred John for ever..she walks up and looked at the monitor..then at john who seemed so far away..as the container disappeared it was gone
Helena didn't say a word to John..she just reached out to his hand grabed his hand tenderly and held it tight..with out looking at Helena John grasp her hand tightly too...how it made him feel alive again...with the womanhe really loved
they both looked at the monitor that showed nothing but stars.....

THE END


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PostSubject: Re: The Comic Siren pt 6 finale   The Comic Siren pt 6 finale Icon_minitimeSat Nov 05, 2011 8:37 pm

I hope you enjoyed the Cosmic Siren...working on a new story soon....I hope you enjoy the ending..tried to make it close to what you might have seen if season 3 had been...

thanks again..till next time cheers
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